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Tuesday, September 1, 2009

There's Gotta Be Something More by Maggie Grey


The words kept running through her head: There’s gotta be something more. With Zach Baker, there just might be.

Divorce. Dead-end career. Disaster. Then fate steps in and changes Jesse’s life in an instant. With her dreams now close enough to touch, she moves to the mountain splendor of Montana with her young daughter. Far from city life, her plans to start her own riding school start to take shape—with the help of a certain cowboy down the road.

A girl with money and a passing interest in horses sure isn’t enough to turn Zach Baker’s head. With the ice wall around his heart firmly in place, he isn’t about to let Jesse chip away at it. It’ll take more than just the heat of attraction to melt that ice, and attraction is all he feels for Jesse, isn’t it? But then, he has been wrong before.


This is a unique story for me. Usually I can either put a story down and never pick it up again or I can’t put it down. While reading THERE’S GOTTA BE SOMETHING MORE, sometimes I couldn’t stop reading and other times I lost the connection. Part of it maybe that it goes back and forth between omniscient and single POV. While in single POV there is serious head-hopping. The book would have been better served written in complete omni POV than to go back and forth.

Another issue I had was the depth of the conflict. While I hate to make my characters suffer, it’s just plain needed to make a good story great. There was some conflict, but I felt-sorry for the pun-there could have been something more. It needed more depth to pull at my heart strings.

The best part of the story was Zach. He’s smokin’ hot! My, my, girls! And his connection with Jesse’s daughter Emma is just sweet.

There are a few editing issues, but the story read smoothly and kept a nice pace. Overall, I enjoyed this read and could see myself reading more books from this author in the future.

I give this story three and a half hearts. Reviewed by Jasmine

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1 comment:

  1. Hmm. Seems to be a pattern this month with head-hopping. This also sounds like a great premise. Cowboy=yum!